Saturday, November 6, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday

“Kiss me.”

“No.” But he didn’t pull away. His lips remained parted and he breathed in soft, excited pants.

“Yes.”

“You can’t make–ungh."


No names to protect the innocent :) (For Kris' gang, I sooo couldn't resist :D )
This little six sentence snippet comes from my current release at Pink Petal Books: 


You can find the other Six Sentence links at the official blog Six Sentence Sunday Go forth and find good stuff to read, folks!

24 comments:

Chris said...

Yay for ungh!! :)

Jaime Samms said...

Hee :)
On a side note, how do you manage to comment practically before the post goes up?

Chris said...

Ummmm... Google Reader must get the post info lickity split!

Lisa Fox said...

Taking the initiative. I love it!

Jayel Kaye said...

I'm with chris The "ungh" is a winner.

Eleri Stone said...

He seems a little conflicted - love that.

Jaime Samms said...

Someone's got to, Lisa :)

Jayel; hard to protest when someone's lip locked you :D

The stroy is a bit about being conflicted, Eleri. It surprised even me.

Taryn Kincaid said...

You had me at "Kiss me."

The "ungh" was the icing on the cake!

Jaime Samms said...

I'm all about the icing, Taryn!

Emily Cale said...

Hmm...He seems conflicted. Maybe she needs to help him a little :)

Jaime Samms said...

He is conflicted. But just so's there's no misunderstandings, the helper in question is another he. :) This is a gay romance.

Dee Carney said...

LOL! That cracks me up!

Jaime Samms said...

In a good way, I hope, Dee!

Christa Paige said...

Conflict is the best, do it, kiss...totally hooks me in.

Jaime Samms said...

Then my work here is done, Christa :D

Lex Valentine said...

You and your angst. ;) Good thing it always leads to hotness. :D

Jaime Samms said...

LOL, Lex! I yam what I yam. :D I do always try to make it end well. *siggering* you should see my NaNo story I'm working on. Angst a plenty there.

Jessica Subject said...

I don't think he's going to be saying no for long.

Marsha A. Moore said...

Sexual tension - love it!

Jaime Samms said...

Important stuff, sexual tension, Marsha.

He won't be given the option, Jessica. More important, he doesn't really want it. He just thinks he does... Mwahahah

Olivia said...

I love dialogue...this selection is delicious.

Jaime Samms said...

I find writing dialogue is so much fun. I'm sometimes accused of being skimpy on everything else...

laynap said...

Sounds like a little more persuasion might enough to take him over the edge. ;-) Great post!

Jaime Samms said...

You know he wants to go there. ;p