“Kiss me.”
“No.” But he didn’t pull away. His lips remained parted and he breathed in soft, excited pants.
“Yes.”
“You can’t make–ungh."
No names to protect the innocent :) (For Kris' gang, I sooo couldn't resist :D )
This little six sentence snippet comes from my current release at Pink Petal Books:
You can find the other Six Sentence links at the official blog Six Sentence Sunday Go forth and find good stuff to read, folks!
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Yay for ungh!! :)
Hee :)
On a side note, how do you manage to comment practically before the post goes up?
Ummmm... Google Reader must get the post info lickity split!
Taking the initiative. I love it!
I'm with chris The "ungh" is a winner.
He seems a little conflicted - love that.
Someone's got to, Lisa :)
Jayel; hard to protest when someone's lip locked you :D
The stroy is a bit about being conflicted, Eleri. It surprised even me.
You had me at "Kiss me."
The "ungh" was the icing on the cake!
I'm all about the icing, Taryn!
Hmm...He seems conflicted. Maybe she needs to help him a little :)
He is conflicted. But just so's there's no misunderstandings, the helper in question is another he. :) This is a gay romance.
LOL! That cracks me up!
In a good way, I hope, Dee!
Conflict is the best, do it, kiss...totally hooks me in.
Then my work here is done, Christa :D
You and your angst. ;) Good thing it always leads to hotness. :D
LOL, Lex! I yam what I yam. :D I do always try to make it end well. *siggering* you should see my NaNo story I'm working on. Angst a plenty there.
I don't think he's going to be saying no for long.
Sexual tension - love it!
Important stuff, sexual tension, Marsha.
He won't be given the option, Jessica. More important, he doesn't really want it. He just thinks he does... Mwahahah
I love dialogue...this selection is delicious.
I find writing dialogue is so much fun. I'm sometimes accused of being skimpy on everything else...
Sounds like a little more persuasion might enough to take him over the edge. ;-) Great post!
You know he wants to go there. ;p
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