Tim is talking to the ghost of the young man he might have ended up with in life if things had worked out differently...
His voice was barely a whisper now and Gordon's nearness sent a shiver through him. "I bet you watch me sleep."
There was a snicker, and Gordon jerked Tim's hand free of the fabric, crushed it in a tight fist.
Tim grimaced, but didn't utter any sound.
"I watched you do a lot of things, Tim‐tim."
"Why did you just watch?"
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I love how Gordon used the name Tim-tim. I wonder what he did just see.
Ooo! Ooo!!! Spicy! I love it! Love the idea of Ghosts/Human :D!!!
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Nice Snippet!
lol very nice
Sounds like a challenge, lol. Maybe they'll make up for lost time.
Thanks, everyone :)
Jessica, I'm sure if you think about it a minute you might come up with something...interesting Gordie might have seen peeking in Tim-tim's window at night :)
But if he's a ghost how can he do anything other than watch? That question makes me want to read more.
I don't blame him for watching...LOL
Very emotional snippet from a genre I adore! Would love to read more.
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That ghosty cover does seem to go with the story doesn't it? And like the others, I wanna know what Gordon saw! LOL
Naughty ghost. *snicker*
Great six, I will have to check out your new release.
Sexy six! I'm looking forward to next week's post.
Lex, your ghosty cover goes perfectly. I love it! And he saw...what you think he saw. :) Tim might be blind, but still has a healthy sex drive ;p
Casi, Tim's relationship with his ghosts is...unconventional, to say the least.
He is that, Dee. :)
Nice snippet. I love ghosts.
Oh, so many possibilities to spy on someone when you're a ghost. lol
Congrats on your new release!
Gordon, Gordon, Gordon. You naughty dead boy.
LOVE the "why did you just watch" line.
Taryn! "You naughty dead boy" *snicker*
Tim does wonder why Gordon waited until after he was dead to say anything...
So sexy! Hope to see more of this.
Very nice! Great six :)
And just what was he doing? Nice!
*tsk*tsk* I can imagine some things he might have seen ;)
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