Saturday, November 13, 2010

Six Sentences from My Latest WIP

It's that time of week again. It's Six Sentence Sunday, and I've decided to give you all a taste of Jimmy, my latest broken hero. He's not like the submissive men I normally write about. He's a lot more alpha. A lot more complicated. And a lot more broken. In this scene, he's decided to let his on-again-off-again lovers, Dean and Adam, have their way. This time.

Dean spread hand over the back of Jimmy's head, stroked long fingers through his hair. "Go ahead."


Jimmy took Adam into his mouth and for a few minutes, the two of them communicated through simple sounds of pleasure. There was something about the smell and feel of taking Adam like this while Dean watched. He could get off on it without anyone saying a thing, without any other touch. He let his eyes drift closed to better enjoy the sounds and the feel of Dean's firm grip in his hair.

Go to the Six Sentence Sunday blog to find a whole slew of links to more authors and more yummy six sentence entries.

18 comments:

Lisa Fox said...

Hot!! My morning is much better place now!

Jayel Kaye said...

OK then I am awake and having fun now!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Holy guacamole that's hot!

Eleri Stone said...

Very hot. Hotter than my coffee hot.

Jaime Samms said...

Glad to wake everyone up on a good note. It worked for Adam, too.

Marsha A. Moore said...

Very steamy!!!

Jaime Samms said...

Jimmy's pretty much all about the steamy bits.

Lex Valentine said...

Man, no one does angst like you, darlin.

Jaime Samms said...

I like to stick to my strengths, lex :) Not to worry, though. I'll put Jimmy back together again. I always do.

Christa Paige said...

I like that he closes his eyes and lets his sense of hearing add to his arousal. Hot.

Jaime Samms said...

Heh. Practically, Christa, that close up, what is ther eto look at? Jimmy's a very sensual guy. Not your average easy lay. That's a huge part of his problem.

The Book Blogger said...

Woah! HOT!
Kerrianne

Jaime Samms said...

Hi, Karrianne. Glad you liked :)

Jessica Subject said...

Very hot! Anxious to know more about the "This time." you mention in the intro.

C. Zampa said...

Lots of sexual intensity packed in those little six sentences!

I LOVE it!

Jaime Samms said...

Jessica, Jimmy's quite a firecracker. A sub who can't quite commit. Makes for intersting writing.

Hey, Carol! considering the entire sex scene is only just over a page long, I had to make use of every single bit of it. :)

laynap said...

One word, HOT!

Jaime Samms said...

Laynop; Good word :)